
Eden’s
story is drip fed through Frank’s observations and the flashbacks in third
person describing Eden’s childhood from her adopted father Hades’ point of view:
‘Eden
was a quiet and mysterious child. She kept secrets that he could find no sense
in keeping – like where she had been for hours at a time, even if she was only
down at the sorting centre helping to fold clothes or over at the gate watching
the morning crew arrive. She sang quietly to herself. She did anything Eric
asked of her, dropping whatever she was doing to follow him out into the
mountain of trash. But she had agency of her own, despite her obedience to her
brother. When Hades went to his shed she would be there trailing behind him,
strangely frightened that she was unwelcome in his workshop. She would watch
him for hours as he sketched and experimented with his sculptures’.
Hades,
is in fact, a very interesting character and his home, a huge house filled with
broken dolls and towering piles of books, surrounded by scrap metal sculptures
made by Eden, is vividly depicted. Frank’s story is more standard detective
genre fare: divorced, hiding a dodgy record, and already rubbing Eric the wrong
way in the office. He’s a likeable character though: ‘I felt the desire for
violence flex in me. A long breath eased through my teeth. I wanted Eden to
trust me, as her partner and as a man. She was weird but I liked her. Eric was
the predictable catch that came with having a dangerously beautiful and darkly
mysterious woman fall right into your lap. I could handle him. He was a prick,
a prick with knowledge of my past, but I’d dealt with plenty of pricks in my
time.’
We
learn little of the killer’s back story but to say anymore would be spoiling
the plot. ‘Hades’ has a gruesome premise, and doesn’t hold back in describing
fairly cold and ruthless activity. In this way, and coupling with the
deliberate mysterious treatment of central characters, elements of ‘Hades’ are
over the top: I’m assuming that this is intentional and the aim was to create a
hyper dramatised page turner.
Fox
writes with confidence and the dialogue and references to police procedures
were fine. Like P M Newton’s crime novel ‘Beams Falling’ I reviewed earlier in
the year, this novel is set in Sydney, and again I’m pleased to see Sydney used
as the backdrop to a detective procedural. Fox’s bio says she hails from
Bankstown and she uses little pockets of Sydney that don’t get glamorised very
often in Australian literature, Mortdale being a fine example. It’s good to see
Western Sydney getting a look in again, like in Luke Carman’s ‘An Elegant Young
Man’ I also reviewed this year.
Fox’s
next novel has just been released and is titled ‘Eden’ thus suggesting that we
are to learn more about the damaged, tough, raven-haired detective. I’m sure
Fox will find a committed following for the series.
*This review is part of the Australian Womens Writers Challenge 2014
http://australianwomenwriters.com/

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